Thursday, May 7, 2009

Adrienne B

Please reflect on the presentation leaving constructive criticism and positive feedback.

26 comments:

SarahE2010 said...

I think you have certianly learned a lot of lessons throughout your life. Even though you are shy, i think it worked well with your presentation; it was really endearing.I really like your outlook for the future! My only suggestion fro you is to speak up a little bit. Otherwise, great job!

kaytlinr said...

The pictures that you chose were really cool, they helped tell your story. I also liked how you talked about how life is more important than anything else. Because later in life drama won't be worth it. I thought it was interesting how you talked about it is ok to be surprised in life.

Anna P2009 said...

Very good work with the note cards! POGS! You were a quirky child and you presented that very well. You've taken a lot of good out of the bad! It's amazing that you are able to see past the sadness of life, just like your quote! That quote just tied everything together.
Your sacrifices are appreciated! You've done so much for this student body.
YA CSU! Very very good choice!

DISNEY!! What a great way to end!

DrewB2009 said...

I liked how you didn't read off of note cards but instead just used your power point to remind you of what to say. I didn't know all of these things about you, so the presentation was very informational along with interesting. Great job I liked it a lot.
Eric Law says-I've always wanted to sky dive.

Lauren L said...

Children really dont hate anything or anyone. They are so innocent.
I learned a lot more about you.
You have always been there for me and I didnt even realize it.
Thanks!
Good luck in the future!

KatieM2009 said...

I know its hard to deal wtih death but it does always bring people together!!! I love your pictures! The are so cute! That is unfair! You are making great points A!!Yay FOCO!!!! I loved your presentation :) you did fantastic!! YAY the princess castle

shellim2009 said...

I like your crayon background to being... it's awesome. Wow. The comment about your dad is very intense I'm so sorry! You can definitely tell you are much stronger for it too! I enjoy travel as well. It's a great way to interact with different cultures and learn lots of new things. I think it's great that you babysit too! you start calling the kids "your kids" by the end of your long history with them. :) Thanks for the cupcakes Wednesday too! Congratulations on getting in at CSU too and good luck in your future!

KaitlanW2009 said...

You really opened up and made us understand your life, and who you are.
It's so cool that you traveled the world! Most people have that as a dream not a memory.
Do you think you will go into a profession that has to do with children?
Your cupcakes are delicious! You need to own a bakery.
I'm going to CSU too! Go RAMS!
What are you majoring in?
I completely agree with your last statement, life is priceless.

LaurenB2009 said...

I like how you have taken something sad in your life and found a positive outlook on life. Nice job tying in quotes. Your impact at AHS has been terrific and you have given back so much. Way to be involved with your life and not letting time pass you by.
After knowing you over the past four years I truly do believe you have follewed the golden rule. Thank you for being you! Good luck at CSU next year, you'll go great!

Wilberry09 said...

I love that you flew all over the world and felt comfortable doing it i would have loved to get many different cultures on my plate. Its great that you believe in optimism towards human nature and can see the good in everyone. i absolutely believe in treating others as you would like to be treated, this is a great message. very relate able!

RickM2009 said...

You had great visual aids, and a very interesting background. Skydiving? That would be awesome! A hot air balloon trip would be cool too. Your take on the point of our last lecture hit the nail on the head, live it up is definitely a good message.

IreneL2010 said...

Adrienne, you started your presentation out with something that is so deep and personal. You are such a happy, smiling person...I can tell that you love and respect life more than the average person. HF2 is quite different from Aurora, I will agree with that! But I can remember when I first saw you on the bus when I was in 3rd grade! You are such a passionate person, I think that is your greatest attribute, and I definitely got that out of your speech. Goodness, you are such a fabulously caring person, I'm so thankful that I could have known you for the such a long time! You are going to have such an amazing future, regardless if you have planned it out or not! :)

MackenzieL2009 said...

Adrienne! You have had some hard times but you've learned from them and have an appreciation for things that not a lot of people have. I like how you used a quote in your presentation! We appreciate everything you have done and sacriced for this school. Good luck with everything in your future :D

KatieO2010 said...

Cello Power! Cupcake power! I thought your lecture was fantastic! It was a very good representation of who you are and where you want to go. It was really easy to connect with what you were talking about. Plus you had a great message that was present throughout your whole presentation. Great Job!

KendraS2009 said...

I like how you turn a negative thing into a positive lesson. I am sorry for your loss. I really like your power point background. Your dog is really cute. The way you appreciate life is the way everyone needs to appreciate it. You are very involoved in school. I can relate how you feel about missing out on stuff to my own life. Being involved is a good thing but missing out on stuff is hard. One thing you could work on is not reading from your paper as much as you did.

mollyp2010 said...

Adrienne I loved your speech! It was incredibly powerful, especially the part about absolutely loving life and not taking anything for granted. you are so unique and I loved hearing about your interests and activities you are involved with. Baking cupcakes and working with kids are two things i loved hearing about in your speech. At first you seemed a little unsure about yourself, but after a few seconds you were great!

JakeF said...

You started very strong with talking about your dad. I like how you wrapped it up into whats the point. Your whole presentation in general was great. You had lots of great messages for everyone and I really got to know you from it.

Knicastro said...

You had a steady and calm flow. you got your points across very well and told us alot about yourself in between. Great Job!

Pat said...

I thought your presentation was very affective. It showed the growth you have made in your life from childhood till now. I think it’s great all of the quotes you used in your presentation to show what standards you live your life by and what is important to you. Whooo CSU! Life is priceless was a great finishing statement because it wrapped everything up you were talking about in your presentation. nice job

Jordan Senior said...

Your story is very touching, Adrienne, your positive outlook was really brilliant at the end and I can't really say anything bad at all!

BrittneyW said...

I loved how you talked about the significance of kids and your impact on them and their impact on you. My mom also works for the airlines, so I can totally relate to your stories about that.

Kim C. 2010 said...

Life is more important than drama you are soooo right! I really like that you talked about your past so positively!! I think you did a really good job of giving your speech purpose. Awesome Speech!

SaraB2009 said...

I thought your presentation was awesome! I really liked the way you tied in the quotes! Wow I thought overall your lecture was amazing! I could not stop watching and listening long enough to comment. Have fun at CSU! GOOD LUCK!

Steven W said...

I liked how you point out how much you've lost and scarificed, but find the great value of your invovlement. Your theme connects all the way though your presentation. I really liked how you always pointed how you found and cherished to good even in the bad things that happened. It is a trait that many people don't have. Great good.

TomB said...

like your light attitude, making fun of yourself a littlew makes it easier to talk to a group. good job!

HaileyM2009 said...

You are so darn beautiful!
I liked what you said about being afraid to plan the future to much because you like to be surprised--I definitly agree.
Life is priceless, for sure!
I loved listening to you-you've got a lot figured out :)