Thursday, May 7, 2009

Jordan S

Please reflect on the presentation leaving constructive criticism and positive feedback.

26 comments:

Lauren L said...

Going to a new school is hard.

Sports always connect you to other people.

That seems like a sweet job.

You did a really good job!

Good luck

shellim2009 said...

That stripped shirt is fantastic! I'm a little jealous. I love the ocean too. There is something so calming an peaceful about the beauty and mystery of the sea. Hand-me-downs are the best though... definitely a good clothing style. My dad too doesn't believe in luck, but he calls it serendipity instead. It's cool that you found out where your heart lies too. California is a great place to live too. When it's not really smoggy it can be beautiful. Congratulations again for all of your awesomeness in DECA too. You totally owned. Good luck in your future!

Anna P2009 said...

Honestly it was a great presentation and there is not a lot that you can improve on. I loved the pictures! The slide show was set up very nicely. Have fun in California! You'll do great things!

kaytlinr said...

I think it was cool how protective of your brother. Also, you are very lucky to have siblings, I would kill to have at least just one. I really like your RUN thing, it brought a whole new spin on you speech. That is cool that you got a job at Jessica McClintock!! I love that store.

Wilberry09 said...

great introduction to your presentation, i love the fashion expertise. you and your family seem to be extremely close and i really get the sense that you love them all. you have some extremely good messages and the fact that your goals send you to the places you would like to be, you must do your best and you have a lot of experience behind you already, it seems like your parents really taught you great lessons. your plans changed and it taught you a great lesson as well, you found your nitch and everything that you want to do. just keep shooting for your goals!

KatieM2009 said...

I love your humor! It makes your presentation flow. I didnt know that you had a little sister that passed away. Im so sorry that must have been hard but im glad it brought you so close to your little brother!! RUN- I love this idea of the way to live your life. You did so good at nationals girl! you should have been Ms. DECA! Ill miss you!!

KaitlanW2009 said...

You're going to be an awesome fashion designer! Your work in Fashion Design class has already been amazing.
I love the summer too.
I liked that you used the clothes to move into the sharing portion of your presentation.
I love the name Fritz.
It's cool that you knew you would go back to California.
I remember when you broke your collar bone.
It's awesome that you're going to FIDM.
Good luck in your future I will be watching for your designer name!

KatieO2010 said...

I loved how entertaining and engaging your presentation was. The power point was very well done and helped out your presentation allot. It was very personal and heartfelt. I liked all the stories you told about your life made it very interesting. Good job.

RickM2009 said...

Excellent use of humor, getting the audience's attention and keeping it, even though the presentation was fairly lengthy. You've gone through quite the transformation from middle school through now. Good presentation!

KendraS2009 said...

I really like your alias name. That is really cool how you rearranged the letters of your name to come up with that. I am sorry for the loss of your sister. I do some of the same stuff with my siblings. RUN is a good way to remember all of that stuff. That is great that you know exactly what you want to do when you grow up and you have a job that you love. Congrats on third at nationals. Good luck in all you do in your later life!! I

TomB said...

wow i didn't know you had moved at such a difficult time. i can relate there, i moved several times in even recent years. i like your running analogy, very clever. hope you have fun in california!

MackenzieL2009 said...

I like how you used lots of pictures to share your childhood! You seemed a little nervous in the beginning but you got over it really fast and presented really well! Good luck with fashion and your future!

IreneL2010 said...

My goodness, Jordan! Words can't even begin to explain how much you amaze me! You are so passionate, creative, and funny! :) I love how you brought so much comedy to your presentation, you got the class to laugh with you and you told your stories so well! You are such a strong person and I love how you are so caring and loving of your brother, it really shows how awesome of a person you are! I thought the "RUN" idea was really creative and it really reflects how you live your life! Your life is like no one else's, you are such an individual! Oh man, you have no idea how much I look up to you! I'm going to miss you so much next year, you really brighten my days so, so, so much!! :)

DrewB2009 said...

Love the funny pictures, they add a lot to the presentation. I like how you didn't use note cards and just talked to the audience. It seems like you know exactly what your doing in the future and thats exciting. Good luck.
Eric Law says-I like how you take life as it comes.

Knicastro said...

Super practical points. I got to know alot about your life.

SaraB2009 said...

DONT BE NERVOUS! :) I liked how you tied everything back to the RUN. Good Luck next year!

SarahE2010 said...

FYI- you really remind me of Ellen Page (aka Juno).I think it is nice that you and your brother are close.You have definitely done a lot of things in your life. My sugestion for you would be to speak up, and moe clearly because sometimes it was hard to understand you.

LaurenB2009 said...

I like how you aspire to be a fashion designer and critique the way you were dressed as a little kid. I remember those days of neon colors and just plain ugly dresses. It's awesome the relationship you and your brother have with one another. It is great that you could get a job that really interested you. Fantastic job with DECA this year!!! It is so cool that you are pursuing what you want to do in college instead of following the crowd. I really hope your dreams of becoming a famous fashion designer comes true; I'll be keeping an eye out for you new name! Good Luck next year!!!

Kim C. 2010 said...

Great opening, making the audience laugh was a really good ice breaker. That was amazing great presentation of what you have done and what you are going to accomplish i hope to see your own designs out!!

mollyp2010 said...

I liked the idea of RUN. Those are really good ideas to live by. I thought that it was cool how you started out with fashion, and thats where you're headed now. It was interesting how your dreams totally changed when you got a job. It's crazy how sometimes you dont even think something will affect your life, and then it completely turns everything upside down.You did really great on your lecture, and good luck in california! (have fun with LC (: )

HaileyM2009 said...

I liked the meaning behind RUN.
I think it's awesome how you poked fun at yourself and just had a lot of fun showing us your life.
Also, it was interesting to see how you grew and how you transitioned from wanting to be a doctor to getting into fashion. I'm studying visual communications too! Have fun next year--I'm sure you will rock it up and I will for sure look for your alias :)

Pat said...

I liked how you used your power point to guide your presentation. I thought it was cool how you were your own person starting at an early age. I broke a collar bone too so I know how it feels. It IS NOT FUN! Just keep running was a great finishing statement that tied everything together.

AdrienneB2009 said...

Your fashion name is crazy cool!
First borns always get the best treatment ;)
There's nothing wrong with hand-me-downs
I'm sorry you lost your sister. I'm sure you are a great big sister.
Realistic goal setting
Unfortunate things happen to everyone
Never give up on yourself
You never think you'll leave your first home and parents usuallu surprise you with it.
Was the time you broke your collar bone the time you said, "Did Mark Twain have a lot of cats?"
You are brave for jumping right into your future! Good luck!

Steven W said...

I like how you decribed your entire life and how each little thing shaped you. It's great how you know where you want to go in life. Great presentation and good luck with the future.

BrittneyW said...

Your continued idea of fashion really shows who you are and what you are about. I really think it is cool how your job got you interested into fashion. I think that is really awesome! You did such a great job in DECA too!

JakeF said...

Your presentation was very easy going and involving I really enjoyed that. It was really well rounded. I learned a lot about you and its really awesome that your going to California right away.