Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Kaitlyn W

Please reflect on the presentation leaving constructive criticism and positive feedback.

23 comments:

Lauren L said...

Sports are one of the greatest joys in life. Not being able to play is very upsetting.

Never miss a day to live and live like its your last day everyday.

Being your self is very important faking never gets you anywhere.

Pat said...

I like your footprints theme it was very affective in your presentation and a cool and creative idea. “Have to give to get something out of it” I like that quote because it shows your determination to live life positively. I liked how you used quotes to show and demonstrate how you are a good friend. Great job

Wilberry09 said...

i love the title of your presentation, it seems as though you have your dreams and can provide a loving atmosphere for anyone surrounding you. parents always know best! thats why theyre there :). it all goes back to the roots you have grown, and you know that those roots can lead you to the place you want to be. i love all the quotes.

shellim2009 said...

I liked how you started sitting on a stool. It was a unique way to make the presentation your own! I really liked the quotes you continued at the top of each page. It was a good way to remind us of the common theme of your presentation. I agree that mother knows best, they are great people to go to if and when you need help. I really liked the "Remember who you are, and whose you are." page, it was very unique and so true to who you are! I also agree with all your quotes. They are good ones to live by. Congratulations on CSU, and good luck on your long road towards your dream!

TaylorS2009 said...

That's too bad that you had to quit, but at least that gave you a new sport to do! I like the footprint theme a lot. Great job on the presentation, it was quite creative. It's awesome that you want to be a vet! Good luck with that :]

RickM2009 said...

You had a lot in your presentation besides your own experiences, which was cool. The quotes and visual aids you had were very effective. Good luck becoming a veterinarian!

Eric said...

I like the quote" You have to achieve wat you want in life, no one else will do it for you" that shows that you are very drivin and that you will do things for yourself and not have to wait for others to do it. Its great that you can take the loss of your family member and turn it into a ife changing expirence and i am sure that he is very proud to have impacted you the way that he has.Good luck with your dream of becoming a vet and at CSU.

MackenzieL2009 said...

I like how you used three quotes to outline your lecture. It's great how you are so genuine! I thought you did a great job during your presentation speaking to the audience and not to the powerpoint! Good luck in your future!

kaytlinr said...

Right on! You spell your name Kaitlyn with a y too. I spell my name Kaytlin and no one can ever spell it right. I really liked how one part of your speech focused on life. I also think that it os neat how you talked about all of the adjectives that describe you.

LaurenB2009 said...

You have a really cool PowerPoint. I'm sorry about your head but things will work out soon. Calvin and Hobbes!!!! Cool meanings behind your footprint slide. "A real friend in one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out" is one of my all-time favorite wuotes, it is so true. Good luck next year and in the rest of your future!!

Anna P2009 said...

Kaitlan (look I know how to spelll your name haha)
"remember who you are and whose you are" I love that and it's a great one to live by. You go out and work hard to accomplish your goals! Good work! I'm glad you learned the lesson about working hard early because learning that in college would've been a major blow. You have great morals and you do a great job staying constant in your life.
I'm glad that you are coming to CSU with me so that we can continue this life long friendship :)

KatieM2009 said...

You are very competitive! Ya soccer team!! ohh great times in soccer! Ah yes the realization that mom and dad are right.. thats always a hard one to see. I like that your presentation was just you talking about yourself rather than the things that happened around you. It was a nice touch of difference! Good luck with all your dreams!

KendraS2009 said...

I like your skirt!! That sucks that you had to quit but that's cool that you found a way around it. I like your word collage. That is an original idea and it is really cool. I can tell that you are a real friend. Even though i do not really know you that well you are one of those people who I feel that I could count on to always help me if I asked for it. Good luck in your future and in becoming a vet.

SarahE2010 said...

I like you theme of footprints. I also like how you weren't afraid to tell us some of your flaws. Good luck at vet school next year, it should be a lot of fun!

SaraB2009 said...

Very creative title! I like it. That is really unfortunate about soccer, but good that you found swimming. I think it is very important to live. It is good that you are a good friend that is really important and i wish that more people were like you. GOod Luck with being a vet! thats awesome!

JakeF said...

Footprints are a great title to start your presentation and lead into it. It’s great that you have such a drive in you. It awesome that you have gotten over the entitlement factor and you figured it out. I love the Walter Winchell quote that is fantastic. Great Job

jordan s said...

I love your idea of footprints left by others, thats a really good idea! Soccer rocks, I totally remember we were in a summer program like freshman year I think haha. Good luck at CSU I'm going to have you save my cat someday or something while you're married and I'm a crazy old cat lady.

IreneL2010 said...

Kaitlan, to begin, I love, love, love you! And I love how everyone around you has taught you so much and that you listened to them! And I hate that your head is so lame! But other than that, you are such a fabulous swimmer (and manager!). And you are always Kaitlan; you never change depending on who you are and I love you for that! :) And you are a real friend and your quotes describe you perfectly! You are going to do so, so, so amazing at CSU and get to be a vet!

BrittneyW said...

Yeah Conmpetitive! So am I! I love the footprints! It really shows how unique and how much of an individual you are. I love the quote, "A friend is one who knows us, but loves us anyway." ha ha that is so so true!Have a blast at CSU! You're gonna do great!!

Kim C. 2010 said...

Thats awesome to hear how important your friends are to you!! I really liked all of your visual aids, and i really liked everything you said! maybe sum up a little better but besides that it was perfect!

DrewB2009 said...

"You have to achieve what you want in life, no one else will do it for you." I like this quote a lot and it seems like you lived this lifestyle. It's great that you can take a loss and turn it into a new way to look at life.

AdrienneB2009 said...

Footprints
"You have to aachieve what you want in life, no one else will do it for you.
Hardcore athlete!
Mother knows best!
Live life to the fullest! Remember who you are.
I love "a friend is one who knows us, but loves us anyway"
You have left a footprint on AHS!
I wish you all the luck in the world and you know it's bumpin' at CSU!

mollyp2010 said...

I think that being a hard-headed person can be a good thing sometimes. It is obvious that you always worked really hard in order to get something out of life. It is cool that you strive to be the same person around your friends that you are around your parents. I didnt knwo that you want to be a vetrnarian but that's cool, good luck! great job on your last lecture!