Thursday, May 7, 2009

Shelli M

Please reflect on the presentation leaving constructive criticism and positive feedback.

26 comments:

Lauren L said...

Steps was a really good start to your presentation.

You used to be very quiet during basketball and now you are always talking.

Wow your grades are awesome!

You will have a lot of hard work to do!

Good luck!

Wilberry09 said...

i love the title of your presentation, its a perfect story to tell. you conquered your goals! that relates perfectly to everything in your highschool career. wow you have some huge goals and an incredible life ahead of you, i really feel like you will make a huge difference on the world and can certainly achieve your goals.

RickM2009 said...

It was really cool how your introduction tied into the rest of your presentation. Congrats on making the lacrosse team, you have a lot to look forward to in your future. You were easy to hear and engaged the audience well. Good job!

KaitlanW2009 said...

I like the way you talked about over coming that challenge, and conquering the step.
I would love to travel also.
Did that 4.0 happen for you?
Being cut from a team is the worst, it's awesome that you confronted your coach and pushed through that wall.
That is so cool that you are accomplishing all your goals! It's not often that people do that.

kaytlinr said...

The story that you began your speech with was really interesting. I also think its how you have accomplished everything that you wanted.

Anna P2009 said...

I love Stargazer Lilies they are my absolute favorite flower they look beautiful on you! haha
You're very driven! The story about your childhood shows that. You've come a long way from your shy days as a freshman.
You get to be a doctor! Your dreams are already starting to come true! Next is the movies! Don't worry I'll get you in the movies ;) You can be in one of mine.
Excuse me what happened to the picture of Dano????

KendraS2009 said...

I like your original title. I like how you used a personal story. Wow that is amazing to be cut originally and become a starter. My best friend is going to Azuza!! That is so cool. I hope you accomplish all your dreams in the future. Good luck doing all that you want.

IreneL2010 said...

Oh Shelli, you are such an amazing person! I love how creatively you started out your presentation! You truly are a very determined individual! I love how you played off of the original Last Lecture with the goals you had when you were younger and how you have the "steps" you need to take to get to that point! You have so many talents! And you are so, so, so intelligent! I can't even begin to describe how much I have learned from you and how much I have looked up to your creativity and determination! I'm going to miss your silly little smile that you give me every time I see you at school!

SaraB2009 said...

I love the title! I like how you compared the steps to your goals in your life. I think it is so cool that you achieved one of your goals!! YAY!! I think the whole point to your last leture is amazing! Good Luck next year!

TomB said...

dang...thats a lot of stuff for one person, one teenager, to handle. your presentation format with the steps was very cool, a good theme.

KatieM2009 said...

I already love your theme of steps and stairs! I think its a great way to make this presentation flow. I would have never guessed you were shy! Oh my goodness Shelli I am so proud of you and everything you have done! I wish you all the luck with all the adventers that await you! I totally know how you feel about working with special needs kids! I know that is what I am here to do as well!

DrewB2009 said...

I liked the first story of conquering that step. It is a great lead in to the rest of your presentation. The pictures you used are really interesting and add a lot to your presentation. You sound like you really know where your going and your future looks very bright.
Eric Law says-I liked how you started with your 3 goals and ended with your accomplishments.

LaurenB2009 said...

I like your creative title! It’s cool how you start of your presentation by taking "baby steps" physically and mentally. Your PowerPoint is very interactive and pulls the audience in; great job being creative. Good transition from one topic to another. I hope the rest of your childhood dreams come true, you're doing a great job so far at following them. It is so great what you want to do with the rest of your life!!! Great Presentation!

SarahE2010 said...

I think it was cool that you had a theme throughout the entire presentation. Congratulations on your 4.0 and your scholarship to APU! I can tell you are really going to go far in life. Good job!

AdrienneB2009 said...

One small step for little Shelli, one giant leap for motivated, hardworking Shelli :)
Young Ameritown was awesome!
Great pictures! And your comments in class are always thought provoking!
Your hard work has paid off!
Dr. Marr will see you now.
Ophelia! You play a great Smith as well!
Good luck to you, Shelli!

Knicastro said...

very well thought out. I liked the imagery and the stories. you also connected everything really well in the end. I liked it!

MackenzieL2009 said...

Awwwww you're so cute! I like how you started with a story that ended up being the theme of your presentation! It got us interested and was an excellent segway. You have had so many experiences and it looks like you have a lot to come! I love how a big part of your future isn't just what you want and what you are working for but it is also to help other people and make their futures better too! Good job shelli!

Steven W said...

I liked how you used steps to show you determination and unwillingness to simply give up. Congrats on you accomplishments. Your presentation really shows how hard work really pays off. Its great how even through all your accomplishments you are still more focused on giving back.

mollyp2010 said...

It was interesting to hear about your various childhood dreams, and how you came to realize that some of them werent necessarily right for you. I liked how you came back at the end to how what you are doing will lead to your childhood dreams. What you are heading toward in the future sounds so great, and i wish you luck! I can't really think of anything you could have done better, great job!

Pat said...

I loved how you started with a theme in your presentation which really wrapped up and completed your presentation. It is crazy all the places you have seen in the world. Congrats on the 4.0 that takes a lot of work and it is a huge goal that you succeeded. Your presentation was very fluent and interesting which kept my attention. Nice job!

KatieO2010 said...

This was a very well done presentation. It was very easy to understand and it flowed really well. Who you are and who you will become shone through this presentation through the stories and messages in your presentation.

JakeF said...

Conquering the step. That is really great start to a presentation. You’ve seemed to accomplish or been on your way to accomplishing all of your goals. You presentation also resembles pausch’s lecture a lot and I found that really cool.

Kim C. 2010 said...

You've done so much!!! A great presentation, great stories. The only thing I would say is that you could ty back in your conclusion to connect back to the steps, how are steps affecting your future.

BrittneyW said...

I loved it, it was so you!! I really enjoyed your stories! I really enjoyed the story about lacrosse cause I saw how strong you were during this and I think it showed in this story. The flower added a lot too!

HaileyM2009 said...

You presented very calmly and professionaly (something difficult for me, so props to you!)
I loved seeing how you achieved your goals and how you plan to continue working towards your goals.
I'm sure you will go far at Azusa!

Jordan Senior said...

YEAH CALIFORNIA! Congrats on your scholarship! I really like how you tied everything back into steps, that was a really great idea! You've done a lot here at AHS and I find your philanthropic aspiration very heartwarming!